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Jamini sketch by ~norithics:iconnorithics:

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©2003-2009 ~norithics
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This is the sketch version of my trade with netsune. I'm almost sure I messed something up, so go ahead and speak up, Kuro.

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*punkerfox Sep 10, 2003, 10:33:31 PM
Hmm. If she's making an attack of sorts, back shot, you might want to square out the hips more to exaggerate the body's twist when she slashes... Maybe also add a little more to her stance. Hmm.. If you've got a mirror, do the action in the mirror and notice how your own body reacts, then try to apply it to the drawing. :D

Like the hands dude and a back shot sounds really interesting. You should stick with that.

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~norithics Sep 10, 2003, 11:20:25 PM
Sounds like good advice to me! I was originally planning for her back to arch more, and her hips should be a little more squared. Thanks!

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*punkerfox Sep 11, 2003, 12:14:29 AM
Welcome dude. ^^

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John Kerry: "It’s a powerful signal to see President Obama, Premier Wen, Prime Minister Singh, and President Zuma agree on a meeting of the minds. These are the four horsemen of a climate change solution."
Who will be War, Famine, Conquest, and Death?
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~nalem Sep 11, 2003, 3:14:18 AM
She's not aware of the perverted predators out there! Turn around before they grab... *grabs but gets slashed* Ah... ^^;

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~ruphia Sep 11, 2003, 6:35:36 AM
"If you try one more lame come-on, I'll cut you, motherfucker."

"Baby, you make me wish I was a pack of skittles, so I could come in every color of the rainbow."

*slashslash*

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~tygris Sep 11, 2003, 6:41:46 AM
Hrmm... overall I think this looks good. You seem to have discovered a knack for perspective shots. The only thing I'm not liking is the left arm. For some reason it looks off. I think that the hand looks a bit messy at the finger joints, and the wrist doesnt look quite right. Other than that though, ink away!

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~spot4 Sep 11, 2003, 10:10:33 AM
Punkerfox had the best perspective advice, so I'll just echo that. Very nice work here.
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~norithics Sep 11, 2003, 2:17:28 PM
Said the perverted predator disguised as prey. =P

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~ridi Sep 11, 2003, 3:43:05 PM
:o This is really neat. Love that pose.

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